A girl gets trap in the mirror story

I was bored I thought of a story and thought to post it.. I hope you guys like the story.

There was one time a girl named Shasta was minding her own business and she goes to her mirror and brushes her hair until this guy name ben comes and uses his wand and traps her in the mirror. She says let me out now and he replies no. The girl yells help. The man says no one can’t hear you or see you. Many say that when the bad guy ben traps you in the mirror there’s a dimension inside of the mirror you that once you in there you can never get out.  The girl never came out of the mirror. The end.

good story. pls write sequel

oooo i liked it. write another one lol

Epilogue:

Shasta is now Ghostrick Mary

Lol. Glad you guys like it. Did you guys really like the story honest?

Why is the girl named after a soda company?

And not Sasha like a normal human being? :3

I couldn't think of a name.

amanda gonezles wrote:I couldn't think of a name.

Amanda is the girls name

make another!

make one about murder for lolz

make one about a girl killing ppl under the bed

Itachi Uchiha wrote:make one about a girl killing ppl under the bed

why not a girl killing people in a pink prius lol
i want to know how that would go

lol that would probably turn game some way

would be fun to read

what about a girl who goes crazy and kills her family

Itachi Uchiha wrote:what about a girl who goes crazy and kills her family

seen that in to much anime and movies... to mainstream and easy

ThunderChidori wrote:

Itachi Uchiha wrote:what about a girl who goes crazy and kills her family

seen that in to much anime and movies... to mainstream and easy

k what about a girl that kills her neighbors

How about we write stories, not sum an entire thing up in one paragraph and fish for compliments?

yeah im the harsh one

! Prince wrote:How about we write stories, not sum an entire thing up in one paragraph and fish for compliments?

yeah im the harsh one

There's no pint of doing that its just a short story if it was like long then yeah. Unless is the story hard to read?

Well there's short and there is this. A short story is typically 5-7 pages imo to an utmost of 90.

! Prince wrote:Well there's short and there is this. A short story is typically 5-7 pages imo to an utmost of 90.

5-7 pages is too much for me to read e.e