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Opinions?

"The rule of thirds! The rule of thirds!"
--Some crazy ol goon

Its pretty good, imo...but I had that saying beaten into me with a metal catcus, but i know why it works. Aesthetically, it would look better if she was moved to the sides (either is fine), with her center being at the 1/3rd marker. It sounds stupid and crazy...but so was my teacher...and it works.

A bit too bright imo its hard to distinguish the focal point

Well in all honesty, too a guy who has little to no experience with gfx, it is very good. I think you did a good job again and hope to see more out of ya.

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Holy craps Sy thats hot O_o Dem I wish I had it QQ Also where did ya get that awesome texture?

It's good but I think it's slightly too bright but still better than anything I can do so good job man.

LOKOS wrote:Holy craps Sy thats hot O_o Dem I wish I had it QQ Also where did ya get that awesome texture?

What texture? It's all hand made except all the circles and the 2 fractals on the bottom left and right of the render.

Well damn XD Great work

LOKOS wrote:Well damn XD Great work

Thanks.
I can teach you how to do it if you tell me exactly what you need lol.

Well the BG looks like it has texture used on it, I mean if ya look closely ya can see all those dots all over it, It makes the tag sexy XD

you have done better kyo, but still not bad

LOKOS wrote:Well the BG looks like it has texture used on it, I mean if ya look closely ya can see all those dots all over it, It makes the tag sexy XD

Edit> fill pattern, for the / lines xs
The dots are soft brushes e.e

Too light for me

Those are lines O_o Oh and yeah lol I should have thought that those were patterns XD

I gotta admit, this ain't half bad, and I have some SERIOUS criticism for this, not bad, but not that good either, here's why:
1. those circles that turn into darkness..., I can understand those blend, but try something more..., lighter
2. I can see diagonal lines from the picture, meaning that was probably how you hand-made it. Try to make it look like a grid..., then I can see it less.
3. Honestly, the Girl can look a little better, I would think she would have one of her hands over one of her hands over her headphones, jamming to the beat, and the glasses..., idk why, but that doesn't blend to me..., and finally, the build itself..., the shirt is too light, so you can be sure if her body is there or not, and it even blends in with her hands and arms of the highlight, but at least her neck line isn't that damaged.
I'm not really a GFX-er, but its just things i've noticed that they can probably improve on.